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Limness Arc_( Need A Rewrite )

  Liatart: The great dark, What do you want of coming to me

  The Great Dark: I am here for one purpose and to convince you to return back to the Supreme Demon

  Liatart: what if I won’t comply what are you going to do about it

  The Great Dark gave out a devious smile and said

  The Great Dark: Nothing of course like I said I only came here to convince you not to try to fight or force you to do what you do not want to do and besides even if the two of us were to fight I do not think that she will very happy to see you cover in injury

  Liatart: Is that, So you sound so confident that you can harm me

  The Great Dark: Compared to 3000 years ago you can’t stand a chance against me right now I can crush you any time I feel like it, But I can’t do that now. can’t I

  Liatart turns around ignores him walks away the great dark shouts from afar say “I’ll see you ter” and disappear into thin air, Now all of the reinforcement has arrived at their location where they will be joined by the other 3 fortress soldiers they decided to camp out here for the night until the other group arrived at around midnight the rest of the other group have arrived and now all forces have united together and all 4 commanders came to a decision to continue their march tomorrow morning and that is the mistake that they soon ter regret at the time when the sun is almost dawn the soldier that is assigned to do a lookout for any potential attack they see a shining light coming from the sky they immediately alert this to the commanders, Everyone is now ready on their position as they thought that the light is a decoy to attract their attention while the enemy attack from the forest the light hit the ground many big crystal suddenly grow out from the ground and stab many soldiers that happen to stand beneath it cut their body in pieces with it incredibly sharp edge these crystal grow everywhere whatever the soldier is, it kill almost half of the forces and wounded many other, The wounded soldier kept on bleeding even though they use a piece of clothing to cover up their wound but they still kept bleed after a few minute they suddenly felt this intent pain on their wound and many horrific scream and cry for help echoing everywhere within the forest as they trying to help their comrade, Liatart walk into the forest and kill all of the soldier while they are busy try to help each other through the entire day all of the soldier include the commander all have been killed around those area of the forest are fill with these soldier’s corpses, The next day Mon Ukea is now furious that the reinforcement are 1 day behind schedule he send a squad to check on the reinforcement he also order all of the active soldier to be ready and take their position he will be attacking the kingdom tomorrow morning, The kingdom’s messenger return back and report that the enemy is now taking position the king immediately order all the general to be prepare for war now both side are in a stand off and ready to attack at any time, Mon Ukea is ready his armor his sword a heading out the squad have return and inform him about the reinforcement have been wipe out they do not know who but suspecting king have been figure it out their pn and attack the reinforcement while he are so busy at the fortress

  Note: Mon Ukea is not really busy he just drinking and has had his mistress compliment him all day long for the past 4 days he is just zy and tries to dodge the responsibility

  Mon Ukea is now furious he orders the attack to start right now both sides are now battling he ter joins his soldiers as soon as he arrives at the battlefield as he runs to the join fight he hears multiple of his soldiers crying out for him to assist them as they serious injures but Mon Ukea ignore their cry out for help and heading to the general of the army’s location instead and left them to die then he arrived at the general and the captain location he immediately jumps out of his horse heading for them and transform his arm into a giant humanoid monster with the intend to crush them to death but all of them notice him right the way they all dodge his attack Mon Ukea start to swing his giant arm like a mad man and the general use their magic and try to fight back but once their magic hit him the manage flesh immediately heal itself all five of them are struggle to fight Mon Ukea

  Liatart is now still near the reinforcement location he returns back to the location where he kills all of them he uses his Soul Purification magic to gather all of the soldier’s souls and requests the judge of the reincarnation realm to take all of them and have all of them pass on to the pce where they could find peace instead of being used by the greedy empire the judge of the reincarnation realm agree but in exchange, Liatart have to offer him a drop of his golden blood he offers the judge his blood then after that all of the soul that is wandering around the forest are now floating to the sky and pass on, Now that everything here is done he is now head back to the kingdom of Limness where he will join the battle to fight the empires’ army

  The king now got the news from his nephew the member of the royal family that had joined the effort to fight the empire the reinforcement of the empire had been wiped out as the Unchosen One had informed them and arrived at the scene where the attack at the reinforcement happened they described their experience when they saw the scene it horrific dead body are everywhere especially the fact that those soldiers were killed in the most brutal way possible it is unimaginable of one person could commit such atrocity,

  Mon Ukea and the general are still fighting the general is seriously wounded the captain is currently treating his wound the general of the army is still fighting to keep Mon Ukea busy Mon Ukea is now transforming another side of his arm and he moves faster than before the general of the army are struggling just to keep up with his speed then Mon Ukea use his arm to punch the ground that it so strong that make a lot of the debris scatter everywhere and even create a big crack on the nd that almost make the wounded general fall into his death after that fail he redirected his attention back to the general of the army he uses all of his strength to throw the strongest punch he can give but the general of the army use his sword art magic to shield himself and survive despite the punch is strong enough that shake the nd and cost a big earth dust the shock wave is strong enough to throw the general and captain off bance and the dust is so thick that they can’t see anything now all of them are now lost sight of each other,

  On the other side, thousands of soldiers are still fighting and hundreds are already been killed some are seriously wounded many still kept on fighting hard some lost their arms, some lost their legs, and Some couldn’t walk due to their injuries trying to crawl to safety but ter been stab from behind by the enemy

  While all of this chaos is happening Liatart arrives at the battlefield he is still kinda far away though but the captain and the general of the army see him and get it Mon Ukea also notices the moment ter Liatart appears by falling from the sky and he summons the Sword of Bance and creates a purple sphere since that Liatart is far away Mon Ukea thought that the sphere is small he can effortlessly destroy the sphere but as the sphere coming closer and faster he immediately realize that the sphere is actually 3 times bigger than himself and he send this intent amount of mana concentration in it he turn both of his arm back to normal and transform it both of his arm and legs into a armor scale humanoid monster to shield himself than he felt that this intent pain from both of arm and legs and try to redirect the sphere but it not work then he try to move away from the sphere but it seem that no matter where is go the sphere is also redirect itself and follow him, His body armor scale is starting to break apart he is struggling just to protect himself and then the scale break and the sphere hit him it cost a big explosion though the explosion is the same size as the sphere but the shock wave is incredible strong it blow the captain and the general flying like a sheet of paper and the shock wave is width enough reach all the way to the other side where all of the soldier is fight it send all of the soldier flying like a big group of ants some are lying in the ground and dodge the shock wave that it so intent some of the soldier is fly high enough for them to fall down to their death

  all of the soldiers that are still alive stop fighting suddenly they see a giant humanoid appear and run at a scary fast speed to Liatart, Liatart is now on the ground he creates another sphere ready the giant humanoid tries to eat but the sphere hits it cost another explosion and send another intent shock wave, The soldier of the kingdom didn’t what is that giant monster at all, But the soldier of the empire know that monster is their captain Mon Ukea

  The empire’s soldiers are shaking as they see their powerful captain is being over power and struggling to stand up half of his body is destroyed and it is burning from afar they see a man standing next to their captain some are confused and some other ter know the mysterious man as The Infamous Unchosen One from the legend

  Mon Ukea is now lying on the ground and cursing Liatart, Liatart walks around him and cuts off both of his legs Mon Ukea is screaming in agony then Liatart walks to his face, Liatart gives him a cold look Mon Ukea’s face is full of rage Liatart pointing his sword at the Mon Ukea face and he creates another purple sphere just a few moments ter, At the soldier point of view another explosion hit this time it is twice as strong from the first two that the shock wave is so strong it destroys the ndscape all of the surrounding forests tree to colpse

  All of the soldiers of the empire are now standing up and their captain Mon Ukea has now passed away the only that remains of him is his legs Liatart has cut off blowing away from the scene about a few kilometers away as it starts to rot all of them see this they are terrified, They all ran away as they screaming to spare their life Liatart slowly walking to the wounded soldier of the empire the injure couldn’t walk, So they crawling desperately to get away from Liatart and the soldier of the kingdom a move away from Liatart to open a path for him to walk

  The wounded soldier starts to think that it is pointless no matter how much they struggle it won’t save them from death anyway, They give up and accept their fate they look at each other as Liatart walks closer and closer to them as they pray to the god for their beloved family to have good health and be successful in life they close their eye and start crying as they thought that Liatart is about to kill them instead Liatart use his healing magic to heal all of the soldier that are still alive it heal them but the magic did not help to return their lost body part back,

  All of the soldiers that can stand up stand up and stare at Liatart in a state of confusion and ask “What was he thinking,”

  Liatart walks back a ignores them he walks to the kingdom’s soldiers and tells them “The war is over from here on the kingdom is now free from the empire’s influent” Everyone is now celebrating throwing their weapons around ughing and crying the news ter reach back to the people of Limness in just a few days ter a big festival is being held everywhere within the kingdom it sted for a week people just won’t stop celebrating and for the family that have lost their love one on the battlefield is now visiting their graveyard there you see father and mother crying as their retive try to comfort them and try to have a conversation with their son’s gravestone like they are still alive Liatart see all this he felt sad and fear at the same time after all of the people leave Liatart got a batch of flower for everyone he pay his respect and walk to the royal capital a week ter the king and the royal family include all of the high ranking official is now visiting too and pay their respect the king went on his knee and bow his head and thank all of the soldier that have sacrifice their live, a few day ter all of the people are now gathering at the royal pace and waiting for the king to start his speed the crown is cheering and jumping in excitement express their joy as the king walk to the pace balcony he start by thank all the soldier on the battlefield and express his gratitude to all them and for the people to always stand by him then the king announce his retirement and step down as the king a selected his brother’s son as the new king of Limness

  While all of this event happening Liatart is on his way to leave the country as he walks he sees an old riding his farming carriage to his rice field he asks him for a ride and he says yes come on Liatart get on the carriage face backward where the carriage is heading to, Liatart ask the old man why is he not to the royal capital to celebrate with the other and the old man reply that both of this son&daughter is already going and someone has to stay and look after the farm Liatart and the old man keep on their conversation and ughing as they going on

  The New King: From here on, we will not be feared by anyone anymore cause we have a very good friend who will always be there to help us and support us every step of the way. The world’s strongest man, the legendary unchosen one, will always be our greatest savior,

  The people are cheering harder than before

  The emperor is now furious and orders the nobleman that Mon Ukea’s superiors investigate this matter and who this Infamous Unchosen One is that they are talking about. A few months ter, the nobleman came to visit the Kingdom Of Limness,

  Writing By: Mr. Kry Seyha

  I am very poor in English, So I apologize in advance, Thank you!

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