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Limness Arc_( Need A Rewrite )

  Old Stuff: I am what is known as the Infamous Unchosen One, and the Savior of your nightmare

  The whole world is now in a state of confusion due to the prophecy of the grimoire of life made in the grand holy church located in the Western world many nations around the world have sent many questions to the holy church for expnation but they still try to figure it out themselves, They ter send out many letter to all of these question in the letter said,

  The new great creations have been made to this world, and this living being will make great changes within this world

  In the far east of the world y a massive tree that was caring by Ta Ei Ssaei his ancestors had looked after this tree from generation to generation, and he expected to be the st generation to care for this tree. within the tree lies a living being is expected to come to life very soon.

  The Abandoned Temple of the first chosen God king, now home to Ta Ei Ssaei

  A mighty God King of the Engkor Empire once ruled this Temple. However, since the emergence of the King of the World bloodline and the expansion of the empire, the people and the ruler of the empire moved the capital to the middle of the empire, and many temples in Prey Meas were ter forgotten

  ter, a massive aura covers the whole area, sending a shocking wave of power, and Ta Ei Ssaei realizes that he has awakened.

  Ta Ei Ssaei:  I should finish this firewood and head to the great tree. I wonder what he looks like

  Character Ta Ei Ssaei:

  He heads to the tree and looks up he sees a body slowly move out of the tree’s branch as the body moves out of the tree Ta Ei Saei could feel this frightening power coming from it he slowly moves away from the body and as that time he felt fear for the time in his peaceful life,

  The body with , only its deep red flesh to protect it. As he moves out of the branch, he falls to the ground and loses consciousness. Ta Ei Ssaei can feel his aura slowly fading, he immediately takes him to his temple as the body heals itself and gains his skin 3 months ter,

  He regains consciousness as he looks around the temple and gets up and looks around the pce. He finds the exit to the outside there, he sees Ta Ei Ssaei standing, drinking tea. he walks to him, standing next to him, and their conversation is as follows:

  Ta Ei Ssaei slowly turned his head and looked at him

  Ta Ei Ssaei: What’s your name? My father and my grandfather never really said anything about your name

  Liatat: I am Sarchrist Liatart that is my name

  Ta Ei Ssaei: Your power has faded quite a lot, Is this the result of suppressing magic

  Liatart: Yes, But I still feel like I am very much weaker than I used to be back from 3000 years ago. is this pce a remote pce that has no living around

  Ta Ei Ssaei: Well, not everywhere, some pces do still have life around, but I think you should be able to try your magic around this area just fine. Just make sure you don’t do too much damage, alright?

  Liatart: Yes, I understand

  Liatart walked high up in the mountain as he enjoyed the wind blowing toward him and sat down til it was almost nighttime he stood up and used his magic to break a small hole in space and it created a powerful wind causing most of the trees in the forest to bend to the ground he ter looking to his hand and thought that he is nothing more but a fraction of his former self, He ter returns to the temple and sees the Ta Ei Ssaei colpsed Liatart immediately run to help,

  Liatart helped get him to his bed he asked if he had any illness Ta Ei Ssaei said he didn’t have any illness but he had used life expand magic to keep himself alive till now at the age of 107 years he says that he would have to carry out the wish from this ancestor no matter what that he is the st generation to do this he knew that he is unable to live long enough to see Liatart’s wakening so he uses life expand magic to extended his life to carry on the wish, Liatart felt his hearth have softened after hearing what Ta Ei Ssaei said,

  Ta Ei Ssaei ter tells him where he can find a spare of clothing that he had prepared for Liatart he asks Ta Ei Ssaei did he made this himself he says yes and Liatart puts it on and goes to the room to get some tea for Ta Ei Ssaei but when he returned with the tea Ta Ei Ssaei have passed away on his bed at the age of 107 years old, He sits down near his bed and pour a cup of tea for him and himself he ter went down on his knee and bow his head down and say Thanks you very much I am forest in your debt, Then he get up drink the tea, After that he given Ta Ei Ssaei and burial he get prepare and set out on a journey

  My goal with my return for this is to stop the horror of silence’s evolution and rebance this world’s power

  Liatart has walked for over 4 months and he is heading to a nd once known as the nd of Gol Lag but to his surprise it is no longer by the name of Gol Lag Kingdom it is now known as The Kingdom Of Limness As he walks he finally arrived at the border of Limness they check him but since he has nothing on him they thought that he just a normal man that lives near the kingdom. So they let him into the kingdom there he walked for another day and he saw a town he visited this town there he saw and food store and sat down and ordered some food as he ate there he overheard a group of men compint about their some young beautiful girl around the town have been taken away by the lord of the province they also compint about that most of their harvest have taken from them regardless of their struggle and hardship and the king is nothing but a useless man who can’t even stand up for his people just because he fears of empty threat from the Maleverlem Empire as they keep on compint Liatart already finished his food he stands up and wanted to know more about this Maleverlem Empire that he never had heard of,

  He went to a item store there he bought a world map and he see that many nation out there are now not the same anymore he see there are over 50 nation are no longer exist and he see there are many new nation have formed and nd once there were a mighty empire are now have slip into 3 separate kingdom and some are other principality too and to his surprise he also see that the Engkor Empire are still stand strong include the western world are mostly the same from 3000 years ago but there are some part of it have change the nd once a strong kingdom are now have been invaded by their neighboring country and one nation have been separated with a new name, There in the map also see this list of 10 world superpower and the Engkor Empire is stand at the 4th world’s SuperPower on the top of the list he see the Merverlem Empire, The Redacan Empire and the Supreme Nation stooding on the top list of the World’s SuperPower and he became very curious of the world’s SuperPower title, So he wanted to learn more about it.

  Then he keeps on walking from town to town and has a lot of random conversations with many people in these towns but the people there are not happy about talk the bad side of their country, especially about their king they just feel very disappointed about him and their country as soon as Liatart notice that they felt uncomfortable of the conversation he immediately tries to slowly end the conversation there he moved on to the next person,

  Now a week has passed he has arrived at the Royal Capital, The Capital that is in the center of The Kingdom Of Limness.

  He arrived and entered the capital and saw a line of people standing to do a check-up with a security guard including a group of soldiers. As time passed it was almost his turn to do a check-up with them and he overheard something about himself that an infamous unchosen one had returned from the dead. All of the nations from all around the world were now very cautious about doing check-ups especially an unknown person with no recorded document to back up their true identity. Liatart knows he can just use his magic or jump over the big wall but he decides it will be nice to just follow the rule, So it is his turn to do a check-up but when they ask for him to present his document to prove his identity he unable to give it to them, So they start to question him all about himself and they ask him to sit down on within the room for hours and then they ask him to go to an office where their superior is doing his paperwork and starting to look at him with a very shady eye and he asks him to sit down on a chair in front of him. Liatart sat down and he just didn’t know all of this about and just gave Liatart some d ocuments for him to read and he expined that he was trying to enter the capital illegally so they are now putting him under investigation and he also accusing him of lying to the border guard of his identity to enter the country despite the border guard was the one who let him enter themselves.

  The border guard superior kept on expining that Liatart was now an illegal immigrant that is trying to enter the country and they had to put him in prison for this crime then Liatart asked but the border guard had already permitted him to enter that he didn’t try to enter without permission from the border guard but he kept on saying that Liatart is now a criminal after Liatart in a very big confusion the border guard superior ask to make him an offer if he will to do it he will let him pass and enter the capital without issue and he asks what can he do to clear himself from this situation and the border guard superior went silent for a few minutes and he writes Liatart a note saying that he will let him pass if he will to offer him with this much of gold coin which it is 1000 gold coin.

  Note: 1000 Gold coins are worth 3 years of an average citizen’s yearly income

  When Liatart says he doesn’t have this kind of money the greedy man starts to talk to him very aggressively with a very disrespectful tone so Liatart uses his magic to create a very beautiful crystal “I have this will you accept it?” The greedy man starts to stare at the crystal and he tells Liatart to wait in prison for now until he comes up with a final decision, So they lock him up for a day the greedy man takes the crystal and asks a very well-known merchant to look into it value they estimate it will be worth between 1000 to 3000 depends on the buyer interest. He immediately agrees to this deal once the crystal sell he will get 80% of the total profit

  The next early in the morning the greedy man returns and tells Liatart to offer him another crystal if he wants to enter the capital ” But if you don’t have the crystal you will be released but will not be allowed to enter the capital ” Liatart replies alright will give it to you and they allow to enter the capital

  Writing by: Mr. Kry Seyha

  Note: I am very poor with english so. I apology in advance. Thanks You!

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