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PART 7 — DORMANT METAL

  PART 7 — DORMANT

  METAL

  XVI. The Discovery

  Around

  noon — finally, when the leaden grey of the sky reached its peak of

  mediocre clarity — they passed near a massive rocky scree that had

  been completely reclaimed by wild, suffocating vegetation.

  — Wait,

  Zik said, coming to a dead stop. You smell that?

  — What?

  — That.

  A

  scent. Faint, yet distinct. The smell of damp earth mixed with

  something old, something ancient, like a perfume of suspended time

  and buried secrets long forgotten by the world.

  — It’s

  just moss, Kael replied, dismissive.

  — No.

  There’s something else beneath it.

  They

  approached with caution, their boots crunching on the debris. Behind

  a massive boulder encrusted with lichen, half-buried under coils of

  climbing ivy that had spent years strangling the stone, lay a hidden

  alcove. Thick moss formed a heavy, verdant carpet, and briars had

  grown into tangled, thorny barricades. There, in the center of the

  overgrowth, lay something that no longer belonged to the living.

  Bones.

  A skeleton. Human, or at least it had been. It lay on its side in a

  position that suggested a violent end — or perhaps just an

  unfortunate fall, followed by a slow, lonely agony in this forgotten

  corner of the hills.

  But

  it wasn't a recent corpse. Far from it. The bones were ancient,

  bleached white, almost polished by the relentless passage of time and

  the elements. The climbing ivy had wound its way through the ribcage

  like green veins threading through the bone, making the skeleton look

  like an integral part of the landscape itself, as if it had been

  resting there for decades, perhaps even half a century.

  And

  yet, despite the weight of the years, it still wore the remnants of

  its station. A chainmail shirt, now dull and grey, was half-hidden

  under the thick moss that covered it like a heavy green shroud. And

  there, at its belt of rotted, crumbling leather, still resting in a

  scabbard cracked by time and blooming with brownish fungi... A sword.

  Kael

  approached slowly, his movements wary. He began to push aside the

  heavy curtains of ivy with delicate gestures, as if afraid of waking

  the ghost. The mail was... plain. Completely plain. A flat grey.

  Dull. There was no magical shimmer, no characteristic silver glint of

  high-tier gear. Just aged metal that looked ordinary, almost cheap —

  the kind of armour a third-rate guard might have abandoned by chance.

  — It’s

  just an old, rotten chainmail shirt, Kael said, his voice laced with

  disappointment. It's worthless.

  — Wait

  a second, Zik countered, his eyes narrowing.

  The

  goblin knelt in the damp moss, leaning in to examine the links with a

  professional focus that sharply contrasted with his usual casual

  demeanor. He ran his expert fingers over the metal, feeling the

  weave. Suddenly, his yellow eyes widened in genuine shock.

  — What

  the hell...

  — What?

  Is it just magical rust?

  — It’s quicksilver.

  — It

  doesn’t like quicksilver, Kael protested, skeptical.

  It’s all grey and dull. Quicksilver is supposed to shine, isn’t

  it?

  —

  quicksilver, Zik clarified, a trace of ill-contained excitement

  making his voice vibrate. It turns dull after years — decades —

  without being worn. It goes to sleep, Kael. But if you wear it, if

  you use it regularly, if you take it into the heat of a real fight...

  it wakes up. Gradually, it regains its full power, its luster, its

  complete enchantments.

  — You

  sure? Because seriously, it looks like a pile of scrap.

  — I

  am absolutely certain. Look at the links. The finesse of the weave.

  The perfect interlocking of the rings. This is the work of a master

  craftsman, Kael. No one — and I insist, NO ONE — does this kind

  of work with ordinary metal. It’s technically impossible.

  Kael

  reached down and lifted the mail carefully, bracing himself for a

  significant weight. Instead, his hands shot upward. It was

  surprisingly light — almost weightless, as if it were fashioned

  from solidified air or a metallic mist. He could barely feel the

  pressure of it in his palms.

  — Damn...

  it really is light. Like, incredibly light.

  — Put

  it on, Zik urged with a grin. Slide it under your torn tunic. No one

  will even know you're wearing it.

  
[SYSTEM

  ALERT: OUT-OF-LEVEL ITEM DETECTED]

  [DORMANT QUICKSILVER

  CHAINMAIL - LEVEL REQUIRED: 8]

  [KAEL'S CURRENT LEVEL: 4]

  [ACQUISITION NOT AUTHORIZED]

  — Shit.

  The System says no.


  — WHY?!

  Kael shouted at the empty air, looking up at the oppressive grey sky. It’s right THERE! The guy’s been DEAD for decades! Maybe a

  century! He doesn’t need it anymore!

  
[THE

  ITEM IS BEYOND YOUR CURRENT LEVEL. DEPOSIT THE OBJECT IMMEDIATELY.]

  — Shut

  up, System.


  
[INAPPROPRIATE

  LANGUAGE DETECTED. NOTATION ADDED TO FILE.]

  Meanwhile,

  Zik had turned his attention to the sword. He drew it slowly, inch by

  inch, from the cracked scabbard with a level of respect that bordered

  on the religious. The blade emitted a slight, sharp hiss as it slid

  out — a crystalline sound that hadn't been dulled by the years.

  The

  blade was long. Exactly one meter, perhaps an inch more. Thin.

  Slender. It was as grey and dull as the mail, lacking even the

  faintest glint of light. But it was perfectly straight, without a

  single trace of rust or deformation despite being exposed to the damp

  and the rot for a lifetime.

  — A

  rapier, Zik whispered, his voice thick with reverence. And not just

  any kind. Look at this guard... the craftsmanship of this pommel...

  He

  weighed the weapon in his hand, performing a few slow, controlled

  flourishes that cut through the air.

  — It’s

  heavy for its size. Around three pounds, easy. Maybe a bit more. But

  look at this balance... it's perfect. Absolutely perfect. The center

  of gravity is exactly where it needs to be for a master.

  He

  ran his thumb cautiously over the side of the blade — or where the

  edge should have been.

  — Strange...

  it doesn’t really have an edge. It’s built for piercing, not for

  slashing.

  Then,

  he tested the point against a piece of rotted wood.

  — But

  damn… it’s razor sharp at the tip. Incredibly sharp. After all

  these years in the dirt... it’s impossible. Unless...

  — Unless

  what?

  — Dormant

  quicksilver too. It keeps its point indefinitely.

  All along the central rib, from the forte to the foible, stretched an inscription in elegant calligraphy:

  "Sir

  Black-Forest, Protector of the Duke of Harsh-Winds and of ladies

  whose honour had been questioned."

  — "With

  questioned honour"? Kael read, leaning over Zik's shoulder. What

  does that even mean?

  — A

  duelist, Zik replied, a small smile playing on his lips. A

  professional. He defended the honour of ladies accused of dishonour,

  or other scandals. He fought in judicial duels — combat to the

  death or first incapacity, depending on the local law.

  — That

  really existed? Like, as a legal thing?

  — Forty or fifty years

  ago, yeah. Before the judicial system was overhauled and duels were

  banned by royal decree. The old duelists are all dead now, or they've

  converted into bitter arms masters in the big cities.

  
[DORMANT

  QUICKSILVER RAPIER - LEVEL REQUIRED: 9]

  [ACQUISITION NOT

  AUTHORIZED]

  [DEPOSIT THE ITEM IMMEDIATELY]

  

  No.

  If you discover this narrative on Amazon, be aware that it has been stolen. Please report the violation.

  
[PARDON ME?]

  — I

  said no. We're going to do a Luck roll.


  
[A LUCK ROLL FOR

  WHAT LEGITIMATE REASON?]

  — To

  narratively justify Kael stumbling upon this ancient skeleton. Think

  about it. He had the statistically improbable — but technically

  possible — luck of discovering the equipment of a legendary duelist

  dead for decades in a remote corner of the hills. It's a... a classic

  trope.


  
[...ANALYZING

  CLAIM.]

  [TECHNICALLY VALID UNDER NARRATIVE PROTOCOL

  ARTICLE 7, PARAGRAPH 12: "HIGHLY IMPROBABLE EVENTS MAY BE

  JUSTIFIED BY A SUCCESSFUL LUCK ROLL."]

  [VERY WELL.

  LUCK ROLL REQUIRED: 1D100]

  [SUCCESS THRESHOLD: 7 OR LESS]

  [CURRENT PROBABILITY: 7%]

  — Kael,

  roll your Luck die. Now.


  — I don’t have any Luck left

  today! I used every bit of it against those crawlers last night!

  
[ALTERNATIVE

  DETECTED: NARRATOR 104 POSSESSES 3 NARRATOR LUCK POINTS PER DIEM. USE

  AUTHORIZED BUT ACTION WILL BE RECORDED IN YOUR PERMANENT FILE WITH

  DIRECT IMPACT ON YOUR EVALUATION.]

  — I can use MY

  personal Luck?

  
[AFFIRMATIVE. HOWEVER, THIS WILL CONSTITUTE

  A PROCEDURAL DEVIATION WITH A PENALTY OF -5 COMPLIANCE POINTS.]

  — I

  don’t give a damn about the points. I’m rolling.


  
[VERY

  WELL. NARRATOR LUCK ROLL: 1D100]

  [ROLLING...]

  The

  virtual die manifested in my vision, a translucent cube spinning with

  a dizzying blur. Each face flashed numbers from 1 to 100. It bounced.

  The

  die rattled to a stop.

  
[RESULT: 2]

  [THRESHOLD: 7 OR

  LESS]

  [ULTRA-CRITICAL SUCCESS]

  Absolute

  silence from the System.

  No snarky commentary.

  No mechanical

  protest.

  Just a heavy, digital void that lasted for ten long

  seconds.

  Then:

  
[...VALIDATED.]

  [PROBABILITY OF THIS RESULT: 2%]

  [THE ITEMS ARE

  LEGITIMATELY DISCOVERED THROUGH EXTRAORDINARY NARRATIVE LUCK.]

  [NO CONTESTATION POSSIBLE.]

  [NO PROCEDURAL

  VIOLATION DETECTED.]

  [EVEN THE ALGORITHM MUST BOW BEFORE

  SUCH STATISTICAL ANOMALIES.]

  — Wait...

  does that mean you’re cancelling the penalty?


  
[WITH

  A RESULT OF 2 OUT OF 100 FOR A THRESHOLD OF 7, ANY CONTESTATION WOULD

  BE LOGICALLY ABSURD AND CONTRARY TO OUR OWN DIRECTIVES.]

  
[...REVIEWING

  PROCEDURAL IMPACT...]

  
[COMPLIANCE

  PENALTY: MAINTAINED.]

  [NOTE:

  PRECEDENT MUST NOT BE ENCOURAGED.]

  
[ACQUISITION: FULLY

  VALIDATED.]

  
[DORMANT

  QUICKSILVER MAIL (ADAPTIVE)]

  [CURRENT BONUSES:

  +8 ARMOUR,

  25% SLASHING DEFLECTION, 25% PROJECTILE DEFLECTION, 10% MAGIC

  RESISTANCE, NEGLIGIBLE WEIGHT]

  [FUTURE BONUSES (FULL

  WAKE-UP AFTER PROLONGED USE):

  +15 ARMOUR, +8 AGILITY]

  
[DORMANT

  QUICKSILVER RAPIER (ADAPTIVE)]

  [BASE DAMAGE: 1D10+(AGI/10)]

  [CURRENT BONUSES: +8 ATTACK]

  [SPECIAL SKILL:

  PRECISE THRUST — +25% CRITICAL CHANCE (COST: 5 MP PER HIT)]

  [DEFENSIVE SKILL: PARRY/DEFLECT (COST: 3 MP PER ACTION)]

  [FUTURE BONUSES (FULL WAKE-UP): +12 ATTACK, +3 AGILITY,

  CRITICAL CHANCE +35%]

  [IMPORTANT LIMITATION: DORMANT BLADE

  INCAPABLE OF CLEAVING OR SLASHING — THRUST ONLY]

  — Two

  out of a hundred. TWO. Fuck.


  
[RECORDED.

  CONGRATULATIONS, NARRATOR 104. YOUR PERSONAL LUCK IS APPARENTLY

  SUPERIOR TO THAT OF YOUR SUBJECT.]

  — Was

  that sarcastic?


  
[NO.

  FACTUAL OBSERVATION.]

  Kael

  began to pull the dull chainmail shirt over his head, sliding it

  beneath his tattered tunic, which was still stiff with dried blood.

  The links seemed to pulse for a brief moment, adjusting with an

  organic fluidity against his torso, hugging his frame perfectly

  without hindering a single movement.

  — I

  feel... almost nothing, he whispered, stunned. He performed a few arm

  circles, leaning forward and twisting his waist, testing his mobility

  with growing disbelief.

  It’s like I’m wearing nothing at

  all. Maybe a slight coolness on the skin, but that’s it.

  — That’s

  exactly the principle, Zik said, watching the young man with a grin. Maximum protection without hindering movement. Duelists needed

  speed and agility above all else. A heavy, clanking suit of plate

  armour would have slowed them down and got them killed in seconds.

  Kael

  then gripped the rapier, weighing it with focused attention.

  — It’s

  heavy. Really heavy.

  — Around

  three pounds, Zik confirmed. But look at the balance. Go on, do

  some flourishes. Feel how the weight shifts.

  Kael

  executed a few clumsy passes.

  — It’s...

  different from my short sword. Very different.

  — Completely

  different, Zik agreed with a nod. A rapier isn’t made for

  cleaving or slashing like a common soldier's blade. It’s made for

  the thrust. To pierce. To find the gaps in the enemy’s guard.

  — The

  thrust?

  — The

  point strikes. You aim for the joints, the narrow gaps between armour

  plates, the unprotected vital points. It’s a weapon of surgical

  precision, Kael, not brute power. You pierce the heart, the lungs,

  the throat. Clean. Fast. Deadly.

  
[KAEL'S

  CURRENT MP: 38]

  [PRECISE THRUST: 5 MP PER HIT]

  [PARRY/DEFLECT: 3 MP PER ACTION]

  [MAXIMUM USES PER

  COMBAT:

  7 THRUSTS OR 13 PARRIES (OR A COMBINATION)]

  — Wait,

  Kael exclaimed, each thrust costs me 5 MP? That’s

  huge!

  — Just

  the special critical thrusts, I think. It’s a technical weapon, Zik

  explained patiently. It requires intense concentration.

  Absolute precision. Perfect timing. It’s normal that it consumes

  your inner energy. You can’t just swing it like a brute and expect

  results.

  — And

  I can parry with it?

  — Yeah.

  The rapier is excellent in active defense. You deflect enemy strikes,

  destabilize the opponent, create openings where there were none. But

  it also costs energy because you have to anticipate, you have to

  react at the exact right micro-second.

  Zik

  examined the sword more closely, turning it over in his green hands,

  his yellow eyes scrutinizing every detail of the ornate guard.

  — You

  know... this is a complete professional duelist's outfit. Light mail,

  precision rapier. This guy wasn’t some amateur playing soldier.

  — So

  what? What does that change for me?

  — Well,

  think about it. You chose Warrior as your base class. But at level

  10, you can evolve into a specialization. There are four possible

  paths, remember?


  — Which

  ones?

  — Weapon

  Master, Mercenary, Duelist, and Knight. The Knight is exclusively

  reserved for humans. The others are open to all races.


  — Duelist...,

  Kael whispered. He looked at the dull rapier in his hand, feeling its

  weight, its perfect balance. I’d like that, I think.

  — This

  sword is worth choosing a class that fits it, Zik approved with

  conviction. I saw a duelist fight once, three years ago, in an

  underground arena in Lower-Ports. He had a rapier almost identical to

  this one and a long dagger in his left hand. Damn, it was beautiful.

  Fast. Precise. Deadly.

  — A

  long dagger?

  — Yeah.

  About sixteen inches of blade. To block, parry, counter at close

  range. Or a reinforced cape in his left hand. Catch blades. Snap them

  aside. Blinded one guy for half a second. That was enough.

  — A

  cape? Serious?

  — Totally

  serious. But anyway, you have your rusty short sword. It could do the

  trick as a defensive secondary weapon for now.

  — You

  mean... fighting with both at the same time? Rapier and short sword?

  — Exactly.

  Right hand, rapier for the precise thrust and the elegant parry. Left

  hand, short sword to block heavy strikes, deflect attacks, and slash

  if the opportunity arises and the enemy gets too close. It requires

  an enormous amount of training and coordination, but with your

  Agility ...

  Kael

  looked at his two weapons. The dull but mortally balanced rapier. The

  short sword, rusty but functional despite everything.

  — I

  could really learn to fight like that?

  — You'll

  have to train. A lot. Every single day. Dual-wielding is extremely

  technical. Hand-eye coordination. Timing. Anticipation. But yeah,

  with hard work, you could become formidable.

  
[SUGGESTED

  COMBAT STYLE: ASYMMETRICAL DUELIST]

  [RIGHT HAND: RAPIER (PRECISE

  THRUST, ELEGANT PARRY)]

  [LEFT HAND: SHORT SWORD (DEFENSIVE

  GUARD, OPPORTUNISTIC SLASHES)]

  [POTENTIAL SYNERGY: +15%

  DAMAGE IN CLOSE COMBAT]

  [PREREQUISITE: INTENSIVE TRAINING

  REQUIRED, MINIMUM 100 HOURS OF PRACTICE]

  — The System says I

  could, Kael whispered, his eyes shining with a new excitement. With

  training. It sounds... really cool.

  — Very cool, Zik

  approved with a predatory smile. And deadly. Very, very deadly.

  Kael carefully attached

  the rapier to his frayed rope belt on his right side for a quick

  draw. He kept his rusty short sword on the other side, on his left.

  Two weapons. Two styles. A potentially lethal combination.

  — Well. Shall we

  continue toward Hill-Furt? he asked, adjusting his equipment.

  — We continue.

  They resumed their

  journey north, Kael walking with a newfound confidence despite the

  plain, dull equipment he wore — at least in appearance.

  But Zik knew.

  And so did I, in my island, away fr—

  — Ah I see,

  is sunbathing, living his best life while he inflicts grey skies and

  porcine stenches on us!

  —

  Anyway. It wasn't plain

  equipment. It was legendary dormant equipment. A professional duelist

  dead for decades. A protector of ladies whose honour had been

  questioned. Sir Black-Forest.

  And one day, when Kael

  used it enough, when he trained enough, when he fought enough…

  — To defend the honour

  of the women he bedded, heh heh heh!

  — Ha ha. You’re an

  idiot, Zik. And you laugh like a donkey.

  The quicksilver would

  wake up. And Kael with it.

  Provided we let him.

  Provided they don’t close my file first.

  After all... if he

  loses the equipment. If someone else recovers it. It won't be the end

  of the world. I could move up in rank. A small promotion. A transfer,

  maybe. Another sector. Another hero. Another beginning.

  I am still young.

  Statistically profitable. I’m not supposed to go down with my

  subjects.

  So yes. I'm going to

  give it my all for him until Day 7.

  Low profile. The

  system likes efficient narrators. Not attached narrators.

  Let's hope the next

  one is simple. An elementalist. A brute. Someone you can push without

  thinking.

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